Sunday, April 24, 2011

Wrote this one a few days ago..state of mind of that moment! :)

mann bhar aayaa!
shayad,
itna bhar gaya ke
chhalakne laga tha..ab aadha gir gaya.
aadhe mann se jeene ko mann nahi karta ab
mann..bhar gaya ab!

kuch hain
jinke liye aadha bhi poora hai..
jinke liye aadha bhi amrit hai..
bhare huye dikhna hoga abhi,
unke liye aadha bhi poora hai.
bhare hue na dikhla sakti main abhi,
unke liye vish hoga.

mann bhar aayaa!
par bhare huye dikhna hoga..
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6 comments:

  1. rohiMay 18, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    ummmm, unique hai, nice..

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  2. Gurwinder S JathoulMay 27, 2011 at 2:45 PM

    Hi,

    Just stumbled upon your blog...wonderful posts...!!
    Nice poetry..keep writing..!!

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  3. AnonymousMay 27, 2011 at 10:26 PM

    nice!

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  4. JaspreetMay 27, 2011 at 11:03 PM

    thanx ruhi :)
    .
    thank you gurwinder :)
    .
    thank you shubhs :)

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  5. NiyaaJune 30, 2011 at 3:53 PM

    mann bhar aaya..shayad itna bhar aaya ki chalakne laga tha...awesome :)

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  6. JaspreetJuly 3, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    thank you niyaa :):)

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